the museum

One day I went to the museum with my class and we had a good fun time. first we went up the stairs throw the kai room with Izac and hi mum and we took a good look around the museum my favourite place was the dinosaur room and after that we meet some nice people and they tort as a haka and showed us how maori people used to hunt what they hunted and when we went in to the whare they done a maori greeting and told us all the special features and and why maori people back in the days build their house as a triangle and I learned that a  a whare is based on a person and his body and family.And there was other schools there and I saw a sword fish,sharks,dinosaurs,monkeys,bugs and volcanoes. I liked everything about it and I had a stitch because I had morning tea and we went all around the museum and I was tiring and it made me so so tied that I could sleep for a whole year or five years and I realy liked this trip and learned alot and hope I come again next year to learn even more then i learned today .  

space man Dun!Dun!Dun!

One day there was a little boy who wanted to be an astronaut but everybody didn't believe he could do that so he builded a rocket ship and studied everything there is to know about space and went on to set his dream.dream. Arrrrrrrrrrr! What a nice day to go on a trip to another planet and explore the universe Knok! Knock!Knock! Come in  excuse me sir you need to go to the government and get full custody for your son for whom your son my son you must have a mistake I don’t have a son yes you do  ok then I will come down .Hello Im here hi sir you must be Harris dunkin yes that's me know wheres my son I'm taking him home wait you need to sign here and here and good by.I want to go home you are going home with me what's your name Max Dunkin ok then well I'm doing my work you don’t disturb me ok Max.Yes ok so the Harris sneak to the space ship and went to neptune wait dad! can I come no please no please heeeem ok then but don’t ignore me   so they went to neptune bam the space ship destroyed a aliens house on accident sorry so they landed and they went out of the ship  this is so amazing ay max max max where are you? so I need to grab my gun,suit,rocket boots,artelety belt and knife if you want the kid then give me your rocket ok here take the kid by dad you gave up your dream who cares about my dream I will do anything for you  Because I love you son I love you the end.

The strange boy

The strange boy

One day their was a new boy who came to my school and everybody thought he was stange. So I went to go talk to him and offer him to play with me but he just stared at me like I was weird. Ding.Ding!Ding!Ding! the bell rang as everyone rushed out the school doors but except for the new boy so I watched him and he ran into a big strange garage.So I ran home and called my friends to come to my house and I told them about how he didn't talk and went into a strange garage.So after midnight we all put on our ninja suits,and got our luchucks,shoes and hats and went the strange garage.And they went in and the boy was crying so we asked him why are you crying because I miss my brother,sister,mother and father and he told us he was a  alien and was trying to put his ship back together and we helped him and he went back to his planet the end.   

The strange boy

One day their was a new boy who came to my school and everybody thought he was strange. So I went to go talk to him and offer him to play with me but he just stared at me like I was weird. Ding!Ding!Ding! the bell rang as everyone rushed out the school doors but except for the new boy so I watched him and he ran into a big strange garage.So I ran home and called my friends to come to my house and I told them about how he didn't talk and went into a strange garage.So after midnight we all put on our ninja suits,and got our weapons,shoes and hats and went the strange garage.And they went in and the boy was crying so we asked him why are you crying because I miss my brother,sister,mother and father and he told us he was a  alien and was trying to put his ship back together and we helped him and and he went back to his planet the end.   

The space dog

The space dog!!  

One day there was a happy little puppy who loved to have fun and go on adventures.but one day their was a weird bunch of men who robbed their house and stole his mum and all his life he has been trying and trying to find her until one day. “Go go go!” shouted the little puppy as he ran towards a truck mum! he shouted she was not their so he kept going and going then he arrived at a weird looking garage and there he found a awesome space ship so he took it for a ride and ended up on a planet called Saturn and saw a strange looking city with flying cars everywhere then Bang! a familiar looking dog banged into him  sorry the dog said mum! mum! is that you said the puppy “run run” shouted the dog oh no a big giant car was chasing them come on mum lets go no no I can't leave this planet if I do the world explode because I am the bomb I f I go back our world will explode just go and leave so he ran back to the spaceship and started to cry and went back to earth but then the mum was just joking and went home with her son and lived happily ever after the end.

The king of the Ocean

Start writing: One day their was a tenager called John John  was swimming with all the others swimmers to find food for their family members. Then he went as far as could go  and then as soon as he stopped and was about go home he saw a shiny glowing and it was a golden spear so he leaned forward then ting something magical happened.

Then as soon as he woke up he was a mermen and he was in the magical land of Atlantis. There were mermaids everywhere and it was as shiny as a golden pearl then he realised mermaids and mermen were bowing down to him and saying “welcome back king” Neptune then a big fat merman shouted “music!”  and people were shouting and dancing with excitement and happiness.

So he tried to sneak away but a merman caught him and said “my highness where are you going” “no where” he whispered. So then  the merman walked away he swam and swam as fast as he could. So when he arrived back at samoa his tail turned back into legs.

So he ran and ran until he arrived at his house and he asked his brother “have you ever seen a mermaid in your life!” john said “no why” “nothing” knock knock knock “hello who is it “ “its me James are you going to come help us John” “ummm I am coming out later” what? Ime coming out later” “ok” james said”.

Then john graped Fred and went out the back door and ran to the beach but there were giant  boats with the german flag on them.So John quickly graped the spear and dived into the warter with Fred and Jhons legs turned into a tail and Fred freacked out and shouted Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrh! then John used the spear to turn Fred into a merman and they swam away.

So John rushed him into the land of Atlantis and to the mermaids and mermen to get your weapons and armor because we're going to safe samoa hut hut hut hut shouted all the mermen and mermaids  so they quickly swam up and and throw spears and water bombs at the boats .

And they were battling with all their might and all their power and we were winning and fighting and battling smashing but then a hundreds and thousands of boats came.