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Thursday, 8 December 2016

If I was prime minister

Questions:
Yesterday John Key resigned as New Zealand’s Prime Minister because… he thought his time was up. He also wanted to spend more time with his family. John Key quoted, “ ...it was one of the hardest decisions I had to make…”.

He spent 10 years as leader of the National party.

The responsibilities of the Prime Minister are to… The responsibilities of the prime minister is to look after New zealand and to create laws to protect people and so our country of New zealand can stay calm and have peace in the world not wae
We thank him for his efforts but… He has been trying to make the rich people more rich and the poor people more poor

Start writing here:
If I was Prime Minister I would… Start off by making a good impression to the people of New Zealand and by helping the poor by giving them food a home and a job and I will also help them with what caused them to go out on the streets if it was addiction or if it was family problems.

I will also give kids a opportunities to get a free laptop phone and free WiFi.

Thursday, 1 December 2016

Instructional writing

Giant walking man eating tree

T-Title of the story Image result for interesting pictures
O-The orientation in the story
P-Problem
S-Solution

Planning:
Title:The giant walking Man Eating Tree
Orientation:Introduction of the characters Brian , Frank and Luke and why they are traveling around to see the tree.
2.how they got there and how are they going to exscape from the giant walking Man Eating Tree
3.How they solved the problem.



The giant walking Man Eating Tree!!!

 
On a bright and sunny day, there were three construction men in America. Their names were Brian,Luke and Frank.The three men were brothers.Luke was the oldest and strongest, Brian was brainy.  The second oldest and he was the brainiest and Frank the Pretty boy who gets all the girls.But one day while the three brothers were traveling around the world they heard from and old lady and man that owned a farm that there was a giant walking man eating tree at Auckland, New Zealand so the three brothers decided to take a plane to Auckland, New Zealand and bring there car and tools with them.????

As they got off the plane with there stuff they ordered a taxi to take them Auckland, New Zealand. As they got out of the taxi they could see no giant walking man eating tree anywhere so they thought to themselves that the old man and the old man were lying to them so they decided to get as room at a hotel and park their car at the back of the hotel with there tools and have a rest.”Boom boom boom..!”the three brothers woke up in the middle of the night it is 3.00am in the morning and there is loud 1thumping noise and ground is shaking.

The three brothers head out with torches to see what is happening outside and when   they get outside the is a giant walking man eating tree.When they see it the little brother looks up and shines his torch at it and screams “Uhh giant walking tree!!!”
They run into the hotel again and the tree goes after them smashing piece by piece of the hotel looking for the three brothers.Until the Giant walking man eating tree finds them and pulls them out of there room but they just slide down the branches and the run to the back of the hotel.  

Once they are at the back of the hotel they think of a way to defeat the giant walking man eating tree while they are thinking of a way to defeat the giant walking man eating tree they see their car with all their tools in the back of the car.The oldest brother say “why don’t we make our car armored with chain saws to cut down the giant walking man eating tree”.So the brothers all agree and they make there car into a beast armor chain saw car .Just as they finished and hoped into the car the giant walking man eating tree finds them and charges and the oldest brother turns the key  speed up to the tree they all brace for impact and they cut of the giant walking man eating trees leg.The giant walking man eating tree falls to the floor and they cut up all the pieces of the giand wailking man eating tree and kills they now have killed  giant walking man eating tree.