The king of the Ocean

Start writing: One day their was a tenager called John John  was swimming with all the others swimmers to find food for their family members. Then he went as far as could go  and then as soon as he stopped and was about go home he saw a shiny glowing and it was a golden spear so he leaned forward then ting something magical happened.

Then as soon as he woke up he was a mermen and he was in the magical land of Atlantis. There were mermaids everywhere and it was as shiny as a golden pearl then he realised mermaids and mermen were bowing down to him and saying “welcome back king” Neptune then a big fat merman shouted “music!”  and people were shouting and dancing with excitement and happiness.

So he tried to sneak away but a merman caught him and said “my highness where are you going” “no where” he whispered. So then  the merman walked away he swam and swam as fast as he could. So when he arrived back at samoa his tail turned back into legs.

So he ran and ran until he arrived at his house and he asked his brother “have you ever seen a mermaid in your life!” john said “no why” “nothing” knock knock knock “hello who is it “ “its me James are you going to come help us John” “ummm I am coming out later” what? Ime coming out later” “ok” james said”.

Then john graped Fred and went out the back door and ran to the beach but there were giant  boats with the german flag on them.So John quickly graped the spear and dived into the warter with Fred and Jhons legs turned into a tail and Fred freacked out and shouted Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrh! then John used the spear to turn Fred into a merman and they swam away.

So John rushed him into the land of Atlantis and to the mermaids and mermen to get your weapons and armor because we're going to safe samoa hut hut hut hut shouted all the mermen and mermaids  so they quickly swam up and and throw spears and water bombs at the boats .

And they were battling with all their might and all their power and we were winning and fighting and battling smashing but then a hundreds and thousands of boats came.