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Friday, 19 September 2014

The space dog

The space dog!!  
One day there was a happy little puppy who loved to have fun and go on adventures.but one day their was a weird bunch of men who robbed their house and stole his mum and all his life he has been trying and trying to find her until one day. “Go go go!” shouted the little puppy as he ran towards a truck mum! he shouted she was not their so he kept going and going then he arrived at a weird looking garage and there he found a awesome space ship so he took it for a ride and ended up on a planet called Saturn and saw a strange looking city with flying cars everywhere then Bang! a familiar looking dog banged into him  sorry the dog said mum! mum! is that you said the puppy “run run” shouted the dog oh no a big giant car was chasing them come on mum lets go no no I can't leave this planet if I do the world explode because I am the bomb I f I go back our world will explode just go and leave so he ran back to the spaceship and started to cry and went back to earth but then the mum was just joking and went home with her son and lived happily ever after the end.

1 comment:

  1. I like this story because it is one of the coolest and one of my most favourites story I have ever written. And I have never written a story like this before in ages and I am proud of it because I think it can help others.Also it can encourage little kids to write and be a good person not a bad person.Like I am rite now and to make them have a good carrier and life.

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